In critique groups, I often ask a member whether he wants
the reader to hear (through reading) the characters voice in the way it was
read. The reader reads the
dialogue in the voice he hears as he writes and edits it. How do you convey that sound, that
unique way of speaking that is part of the character you are creating and
developing?
Four ways:
1. Sentence
structure: requires that the author be skilled and have a degree of mastery of
the craft of writing- vocabulary, grammar and imagination. Also, a sense of patience and
dedication to do it right, to be thorough and diligent in producing the words
and syntax that will make the character's voice reflected in the mind of the
reader.
2. Word
emphasis: almost any word in a sentence can be emphasized, vocally, and
emphasizing different words give the sentence different connotations.
Italicize the correct word for the
reader to emphasize.
3. Dialect:
it takes effort and consistency to illustrate in writing what a word sounds
like the way the character pronounces it.
It is essential, however, if you want the character to be authentic.
4. Cadence:
use punctuation- commas, m-dash and ellipsis to match the writing to the stops
and starts, hesitations and pauses in the character's speech.
These instructions are probably listed in many books and
articles. I made them up, however,
this morning over a cup of tea.
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